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Well that was...short. Please try to find the missing parts. I wouldn't have posted this, since it skips some parts, but I guess I shouldn't complain. And they fixed the TV, yei
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You have to change those -- s to , or : but you're not supposed to use -- for anything when writing.I can say with all honesty this is the best story in YWS I have read so far (sorry Anzius). I would like it if you would take the time to review my story, despite it not being as good as yours.